(The short story “Invisible Bird” by Claire-Louise Bennett appeared in the May 30th, 2022 issue of The New Yorker.)
(Odds are there are SPOILERS!)
Well… I’m not sure what to make of “Invisible Bird” by Claire-Louise Bennett. I have had this happen to me several times of late, when reading a short story from a magazine; I finish reading it, I don’t dislike it, but my gut tells me that I am missing something. Like, if I wouldn’t have missed that one day in my senior English class, then I would totally understand this story. Or, being that I didn’t get an MFA in creative writing, that’s why this story doesn’t work for me. That might be true, but I hope it isn’t. In these reviews, I try to read each story as is, and don’t read up on the author, or research anything the author has to said about the story. This way I enter the story with a clean slate, tabula rasa so to speak, and go with what my gut tells me.
My gut tells me I’m missing something.
The story is about a girl who recently finishes her degree in London, but being that she is behind on her rent, is politely booted from her flat, and is forced to move back home. Then, her and her boyfriend, after he sells his car, go to Dublin, only to find themselves homeless and scrounging to survive. They live on the streets for a time, make some unsavory friends, beg, work jobs that steal from them, but still earn enough money to rent an apartment. They build a home in the apartment, and the girl starts to write, the boy moves back to England, while she stays in Dublin. The End…
The story is pretty straight forward, like the description I gave, and I was entertained by it. But what I didn’t get was how to feel toward the girl. Essentially, her and her boyfriend are, for lack of a better term, are “slumming it.” They are tourists. They are college educated young people, who choose to be homeless. The girls describes their experiences in a light, almost, fun way. I kept rereading to see if there was a hint of irony, or sarcasm, or even satire, but I couldn’t find it. The story felt like it was presenting the girl, and all of these events as straight. And if that is true, then why did this girl want to be homeless? (I have worked in a shelter, and being homeless is scary and tough as shit. I have never met anyone who wanted that life.) So, what am I not getting here?
It felt too easy for the girl, and too succinct. It made me wonder if this was an excerpt from a novel, or a much longer story that was pared down. It’s not bad. Just, it felt like something was off.
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Matthew Groff 